Sometimes when sitting down to write a review I find myself thinking like I am preparing the box score for last night’s baseball game. But instead of ERA, base hits, errors, etc., I am thinking in terms of (1) plot development (or furtherance, depending on whether the book is the 1st or 5th or last in a series), (2) character development (ditto on the “or furtherance” part), (3) dialogue, (4) plot holes, (5) world building, (6) reality scale (to me, this is akin to the difference between animation, like Zootopia, and Tomorrowland – both fiction with fantastical elements but one is clearly trying to emulate reality in at least some aspects (Tomorrowland) whereas the other is a cartoon), (7) action (both pace and excitement levels), (8) pace of the story, and (9) if I read an “adult book” – steaminess or if I read a YA book – teenage angst.
So, how exactly did Faelorehn by Jenna Elizabeth Johnson fare? If this were a baseball game, I would say that we are in extra innings, waiting to see how things end up. (And we would be waiting for a little while, because while it looks like I could get at least the next book right away, I have a number of other things I need to read first)! If it were soccer, in a non-playoff sense, I would say it was a 0-0 draw. Why? Well, if I were rating all 9 items (you know, like innings) above on a scale of 1-10 (worst to best) then the score would look a little like the chart below. Which isn’t terrible, it wold be extra innings after all, where there is still a chance to add a notch to the “W” column (for the reader, since I see this as author vs reader and if the reader wins, its because they were able to enjoy a truly excellent book and if the author wins, then it was just about getting words on pages). But, it’s close enough that there is still risk of loosing too. It all depends on the next book, or more at bats.
Pregame (what you need to know): Meghan is a foster child, in a big family, who all love her. She is different though. For as long as she can remember she sees things, thing the trees can talk to her, stuff like that. She is a teenager, going to school, and has a small group of close friends who are all the non-popular kids. A few of the popular kids really hate her though. A mysterious “hobo” starts hanging around school. She spends some time in the swamp near her house one Halloween and she starts seeing and hearing things again. He reoccurring dream starts to change. She gets attacked. And that’s when she finds out she is really from a different world – she is Fae.
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See? Looks a little like a score board.
Plot Development: Book 1 was really more set up than plot development; the real “plot” could be summarized in about 3 sentences and didn’t need the whole book to flush out. The entire plot really was: Megahn is different and discovers why from a mystery man. Turns out she is Fae and she needs to stay away from her real home or she will be in danger. In the end, she is tricked into stepping into her homeland, looses her protection, and is now going to be hunted. Oh, and she falls for the mystery man. Ok – so that took 4 sentences. It was missing something, something that makes even a set-up book more compelling. It wasn’t awful, just wasn’t a thrilling enough set-up and plot to leave me starving for more and what ever comes next.
Character Development: Meghan – pretty well developed. Cade, not so much. But that was ok since Cade is the dark, strange, handsome mystery guy.
Dialogue: It was decent. I wasn’t rolling my eyes as I read stuff, an most of it felt pretty natural. There is a “but” though. Some of the word choices were a little… off… to have Cade say her kind has a character “flaw” or defect, when really , it’s just that they are a little different, bothered me.
Plot Holes: There weren’t too many, but the ones that existed were pretty big.
Example 1: Meghan really goes with the strange crow woman (doesn’t take a genius to figure out who she really is, by the way) after less than 30 seconds of convincing? Nope, don’t believe it.
Example 2: Her best, closest friends don’t know her well enough, see her often enough, hang with her enough, so that she can hide/create a mysterious made up boyfriend? Nope, don’t believe it.
World Building: This installment was mostly set up. But it only gets a seven because the “world” was not really all that different from the real world. And we don’t get many rules of the Fae world until the end, and even then, we get very few. I adored the spirit guide dog though! Need more!
Reality: Almost a little too real – very little paranormal/fairy in it. At least until the end. Needed more fantasy. Although, it was nicely set up with the real world elements, including down to the information about Meghan being placed with her family.
Action: Lots of non-action action. Sure, Meghan get attacked, and followed by some crows. But she spends too much time reading, and like I said about the plot, not enough time getting into situations where I felt pulled into the world and the action and the plot. I will read the next, but I am not yearning with every breath to see what happens to Meghan and Cade next. Just not enough to it all for that. Wish I could say otherwise.
Pace of Story: Super, duper, extra, awfully and tremendously ssssssslllllllooooowwww. See all the previous items for details on this!
Genre Specific: There’s a little bit of romance (although it is mostly implied and the reader has to infer it from the minimal actual page time Meghan and Cade have together). Not tremendously consistent with the genre, the parents are not absentee parents. Instead, they are present, and so are all of Meghan’s adoptive siblings. The story is just built so that the parent’s don’t need to be absentee to move the (little bit of) plot along. Seems that actual Celtic mythology influences the story, and that is great! As an add, there are teenage bullies here and they are pretty awful. But it is clear that they are bullies and their actions are not glorified, so I am ok with their presence (as well as a little bit of ass-kicking with them, since I think most bullies eventually need a whopping or they don’t learn).
There’s also the standard miscellaneous items that tend to go with a box score – in this case, the grammar wasn’t terrible and the bottom line, what isn’t evident from a perusal of just the numbers, is that I will read at least the next installment. I just hop it has a little more plot depth, so that when the game is over, there is a clear winner. But at the end of the 1st, score is tied, and I can’t tell which way the game is going to go!